Score: 5

"This is just a note to the last reviewer:"

submission: Easter Song!

date: April 11, 2006

Mr Pie,
Normally, I stay away from involvement in this sorta thing, but I just had to say that if you spend your nights waiting for cartoon girls in bunny costumes to get naked, then you should probably get a life. Or a girlfriend. Probably both.

To the author: cute. Sortof. Made me smile. Nicely drawn.

Score: 6

"Need some conceptual work"

submission: Synix

date: April 11, 2006

Nicely done. It's an original twist on a classic game. However, there are some problems. The great thing about snake and nibbles (for all you old school folks who remember the Q-basic game that came with most comptuers) was that there was no spot too tight to get to if you were fast enough. If you were fast and coordinated enough, the snake would turn tightly and squeeze into any spot to get any number.

The problem here is that the spaceship is too big and doesn't turn fast enough. Often, the crates would appear in places that I just couldn't get to, no matter how nimble my fingers were. This is frustrating in a bad way and ultimately detracts from the game.

I do however like that you can move at all angles. You need to find a compromise between keeping the range of motion and making it fast enough to maneuver anywhere. And the ship needs to be smaller (ie, same width as the exhaust tail).

Lastly, the exhaust trail might be a bit too long a bit too soon. The idea is that it only gets a little bit longer with each number (or crate). Most of the time when I played your game, the end of the exaust trail rarely moved unless I worked to make it.

Good job, though. Keep working.

Score: 8

"Very nice"

submission: Please

date: April 7, 2006

Nicely done. Original style and nice message. Moving. Well done!

Score: 6

"neat"

submission: Inveterate

date: April 7, 2006

Pretty good, but I think the word you're looking for is "invertebrate." With a "b." Or maybe you meant to spell it wrong... I dunno, but just in case... "invertebrate."

Score: 6

"Good work, just a tip"

submission: COTD 2 trailer

date: March 20, 2006

Looks good, but here's a tip:
I don't know if you meant it or not, but it looks like he's "pumping" the AK as thought it were a shotgun. This is not correct; only shotguns are pumped in such a fashion. On an AK, a round is chambered by pulling on the charging handle behind the receiver. Just so you know. Keep up the good work.